[tw: pedophilia, rape mention, suicide mention]
The second book in a trilogy is seldom as good as the first book and is only as good as the third if the finale sucked. Second books occupy the precarious position between the exciting newness of the first book and the exciting race to the finish of the third. Rarely do second books completely flip the script on their predecessor. For an example, see The Tainted City by Courtney Schafer.
Alternatively, read Prince’s Gambit.
Whereas Captive Prince was set in the intimate world of the Veretian palace, Prince’s Gambit is set on the open road as Laurent and Damen make their way across Vere to the border it shares with Akielos. Both Laurent and Damen are keenly aware that they are playing into the Regent’s hands, but are determined to thwart him. Unfortunately, they have a disorganized rabble of an army composed of feuding factions to deal with in addition to the machinations of Veretian nobility. And of course, they both have secrets and pesky feelings to contend with as well.
As much as I love courtly intrigue, Prince’s Gambit is mostly devoid of the rapeyness and pedophilia of its predecessor. It focuses more on rivalries between Laurent’s men and the Regent’s men that he totally hasn’t sent to keep an eye on the prince. There are swordfights, daring escapes, a truckload of sexual tension, and shocking twists. There are rooftop chase scenes, disguises, and awkwardly being pressed against your partner as you try to keep quiet lest the man having sex in the room next to you hears you moving around. It put me in mind of the politicking in Kushiel’s Dart, only Laurent and Damen take a slightly more active role in attempting to outplay the Regent.
Recently, a friend asked me what I liked about this series, because she’d heard some awful things about it from friends. I thought about it for a sec and I finally said “I like the characters,” and it’s true. The characters are what makes this series. They are all deeply flawed individuals who have all been through hell in one way or another. Damen is brave, loyal, and proud, Laurent is, as always, a cunning manipulator who is a bit of an asshole. My one issue with Damen in this book is that he’s still very much underestimates what Laurent is capable of doing, although this is likely because he can’t shake the stereotypical view of Veretians as soft and indolent, and, to be fair, he’s been on the receiving end of stereotyping for a whole book now.
One complaint I had about the last book was the lack of women. While the book is still mostly about men doing manly things, we do get a glimpse of Vaskian culture, which is matriarchal, with women warriors and clan leaders. A second complaint I had about the first book is the way Damen’s treatment at the hands of Laurent is never really addressed. In this book, Laurent apologizes for treating Damen “cruelly”. Damen’s rape in Captive Prince is acknowledged as not being Ancel’s work, but Laurent’s: “it wasn’t Ancel, we both know it was you”. I can’t help but see this as too little too late, and it of course doesn’t justify what happened to Damen, but as I said, neither of these characters are perfect cinnamon rolls. Thirdly, at times the book goes a bit slowly as paragraphs are devoted to discussing military strategy and politics that, while important to the plot, aren’t exactly the most exciting reading. The rooftop chase, disguises, and swordfights and battles more than make up for it, in my opinion.
In terms of triggery content, there’s a scene where Damen is triggered and recalls his whipping in the last book. There are also references to the Regent’s pedophilia (without spoiling anything, a character is revealed to have been another of his victims). Damen has (consensual) sex with a group of women (although he is technically still a slave at this point, Laurent has no say in his choice). There is also a lengthy sex scene towards the end of the book which is pretty explicit. There is also a suicide.
In sum, I enjoyed Prince’s Gambit, although as I said before, I don’t think it’s for everyone and I completely understand why most people wouldn’t want to read it. Heck, I went into it expecting to loathe it. That said, I can’t wait to finish the trilogy.